[Testi] Peeping Tom, by Jizzlobber, dal lavoro iniziale di yumiho e Fantômas

okkei allora facciamo
im out on your balcony
singing a serenade?

mica decifri pure l'ultimo boh! Io proprio non riesco a capire quella parola

dici il secondo bho?
ho editato il messaggio di prima

mi pare anyway is enough....me pare...

l'ho scritta tutta (la strofa) o quasi...per vedè se c'ha senso...

mmmmmm, nin zo'
per il secondo e ultimo boh, non sono sicurissima
invito gli altri due moderators as esprimersi
io mi riascolto la canzone con il suggerimento di shaz intanto

ehm...ci sono i testi che si trovano su internet....
(non avevo mai cercato)

I'm your neighborhood spaceman.
You don't know who I am,
or where I've been.

Circling like a satellite.
Sigh post in the sky,
look at me.

I'm really just a tamborine
The world is shaking me,
so listen(?).

cause now I'm gonna sing,
I'm comin' home.
You hear my song through the galaxy.

Time's light has reached your eyes.
World has lived and died, but we're here.

Time and space are landing right where we're standing.
Open up your hand and something good will happen.
Drinking on the sun,
we found a whole new planet.
Stars align a thousand times that old black magic.

When no one is looking,
ain't gonna shut my mouth and I'm crying out.
When no one is looking,
I'm on the balcony singing the serenade.
When no one is looking,
I swallow thunder clouds, I kiss the hollowed ground.
When no one is looking,
I eat the desert sand and drink the Rio Grande.
When no one is looking,.
I'm crying raindrops and chewing mountain tops.
When no one is looking,
I break another rhyme and I'm stopping time.

I'm your neighborhood spaceman,
and your breath is moving through me.
On the surface of this moon I can say to you, It's okay
Somebody inside of us makes this joy a must(?),
then we'll be knee deep in ecstasy no gravity to hold us down again.
Were Free!
A thousand light years from this place,
I see the look on your face and I'm there.

Time and space are landing right where we're standing.
Open up your hand and something good will happen.
Drinking on the sun,
we found a whole new planet.
Stars align a thousand times that old black magic.

When no one is looking,
I'm gonna buckle down, I'm gonna hit the ground.
When no one is looking,
I got to understand, I'm packin' up again.
When no one is looking,
I'll pull the car around cause I'm leaving town.
When no one is looking,
I'm just a rocket man , I've seen the light again(?).
I'll never give up,
I'll never let you down, I'll break through the crowd
I'll never give up,
but On the Other hand I wanna be the man.
I'll never give up,
I'll never let you down, I'll break through the crowd
I'm courageous enough,
but on the other hand I'm out of here, my friend


sito:


http://www.lyricsmania.com/lyrics/peeping_tom_lyrics_8915/

@yumiho: ma guarda che la mia era una battuta!!
Figuriamoci se me la prendo per 'ste cose... Dopotutto sia te che Elena ormai siete Mod!!

Anzi, e ora torno serio, fate pure senza troppo aspettare le mie opinioni... (perchè in realtà sono io che non mi chiamo in causa! ).. perchè da un mesetto io a casa ci torno solo per dormire e a volte mangiare, quindi non ho molto tempo per sentire musica attentamente e per correggere testi....
fate pure senza di me, che siete dei mostri di inglese!!

Per dicembre ritornerò a essere un po' più attivo, sistemerò le traduzioni dei X-ecutioners e mi darò un po' al restauro grafico della sezione Tomahawk...

Shaz credimi quel testo che hai trovato e' pieno di errori, e non dice serenade te lo assicuro, proprio non riesco a capire quella parola e l'ho chiesto pure ad un madrelingua che non la capisce.
Per quanto riguarda l'ultimo boh, dice effettivamente courageous come nel testo che hai trovato, quindi cambio. fidati a parte quella parola mancante questo e' il testo definitivo.

5. YOUR NEIGHBORHOOD SPACEMAN


(nota: grazie yumiho!!!)




I'm your neighborhood spaceman
you don't know who I am
Where I've been
Circling like a satellite
A signpost in the sky
Look at me

Really just a tambourine
the world is shaking the solar sand
'cause now i'm gonna sing
I'm coming home
You'll hear my song through the galaxy
By the time this light has reached your eyes
The world has lived and died but we're here

Time and space are landing right where we're standing\
Open up you hand and something good will happen
Drinking from the sun with us on a new planet
Stars are lined up a thousand times that old black magic

When no one is looking
Ain't gonna shut my mouth and I'm crying out
I'm on you balcony
Singing the (boh!)
I'm swallowed up underground
I kiss the hollow ground
I eat the desert sand and dring up the rio grande
I'm crying raindrops and chew a mountain top
I'm bringing up the rock and I'll stop the time

I'm your neighborhood spaceman
and your breath is moving from me
On the surface of this moon
I can say to you it's ok
Somebody inside of us makes this joy a must
And we'll be knee-deep in extasy
No gravity to hold us down again
we're free
Thousand light years from this place
I see the look on your face and I'm there

I've gotta buckle down
I'm gonna hit the ground
I've got understand I'm back and off again
I'll pull my car around 'cause I'm leaving town
I'm just a rocket man
I've seen the light again

I'll never give up, I'll never let you down
I'll bring you the crown
Im opening up
But on the other hand
I wanna be the man

I'll never give up, I'll never let you down
I'll bring you the crown
Im courageous enough
But on the other hand
I'm out of here my friend

vabbo' Jizz a te la grafica, io ho fatto un casino

è preschool che un se trova

yumi...a me pare proprio serenade.....
cioè...a parte avere senso...è la prima impressione che mi ha dato...
poi dopo pure il tizio che ha scritto su quel sito aveva la stessa impressione...
non so che cosa possa cantare a un balcone se non una serenata...

lo so pure a me viene da dire serenata, eppure ogni volta che lo riascolto non riesco a convincermi. Moderatori!! Allora?

Allorasentiteunpo':

1) ho corretto graficamente nel post adatto My Neighborhood Spaceman suggerita da yumiho

2) anche io non riesco a capire che cazzaccio dice, ma obbiettivamente "serenade" è la parola più plausibile e per ora lascio quella.... anche se a sentirla e risentirla effettivamente suona strano, c'è una sillaba "aspirata" che con "serenade" non c'incastra una sega....

3) allora per Don't Even Trip che faccio? qual'è la versione definitiva? postatela appena potete!

Jizz, ecco don't even trip versione definitiva

. DON'T EVEN TRIP




i think you're old enough to know it better
but i'm old enough to remember
(don't even trip........)
i won't use that stupid word forever
(cross your heart and hope to die)

don't even trip,
don't get too big for your britches
(don't even trip........)
all these bones been jumping out of your closet
(you're not in your closet yet)
so blasé,
don't turn and look the other way
(you wanna be a star)
you want to be a star
you're oh so near, yet oh so far

(don't even trip........)

you'll be flying south before the winter
on that long, long trip off december
(don't even trip........)
don't be throwing stones outside the window
(look in peace and close your eyes?)

don't even trip,
don't get too big for your britches
(don't even trip........)
all these bones been jumping out of your closet
(you're not in your closet yet)
so blasé,
don't turn and look the other way
(you've gotta have it all)
you've got to have it all
you're oh so near, yet oh so far

And i know that arseholes grow on trees but i'm here to trim the leaves
and i'm afraid
that you're still my friend
and you're just a piece of shit
but i can over-look it today
'cause you're still my friend

(don't even trip........)

drop that gun, you aren't my fuckn hero
(don't even trip........)
you think its cool to be a fuckin zero
i can't believe i called you my amigo
(take a deep breath you'll be fine)

speek up now
and one of you is a hundred loud
(when you preach you come off)
when you preach,
they'll join you on the roofs and streets
(like crystal clear)
crystal clear,
i'm hanging like a chandelier
(watching over you)
watching over you,
i'll move you from a song to tears

and i know that arseholes grow on trees
but i'm going to trim the leaves
and i can say
that you're still my friend
and you're still a piece of shit but i can over-look it today
'cause you're still my friend
and i know that arseholes grow on trees
but i'm here to trim the leaves
and i'm afraid
are you still my friend?
and you're still a piece of shit but i can look the other way
'cause you're still my friend
(don't even trip........)

Ok

Ho riascoltato la canzone e cambiato un pezzo che secondo me e' sbagliato. Magari qualcuno ricontrolla?


4. GETAWAY


(The 16 seconds that make it)

Escapin the situation,
im outta the trap zone, (trap zone)
the ringers turned off on my, cellular phone (cellular phne)
the interm wants to be...detector, hold up, the silver money fold up, black and the cold is commin by me

you got to get away, you got to get away
you got to get away, because were here to stay

my gettaway is the boat(boat)
P.O.39 by the westside(holla)
my skin is on point (on point)
im more easy to rob,
police on my trail, i gotta slide away like that express mail (mail, mail)

you got to get away, you got to get away
you got to get away, because were here to stay
you got to get away, you got to get away
you got to get away, because were here to stay

my imagination surprise you,
like the new york city subway,
third rail, one half is missing, three third fail
cant track down, by the phone, definitely not by e-mail

we get up on them, the back alleys din, that look familiar in a high school way, we gotta get away
they get up on us too, subway scream in red and blue, lonely streetlights that don't love my name, it looks burning, we get up on them

you got to get away, you got to get away
you got to get away, because were here to stay
you got to get away, you got to get away
you got to get away, because were here to stay